Where we're improving our film:
- chase sequence needs to be extended, more dramatic and clearer
- the dialog is too quiet
- the heroin sequence needs to be more graphic with drug taking
- to improve and clarify the narrative, we aim to have a brief sentence to describe the situation.
- the picture quality is also in need of improvement
In order to achieve these aims we are going to re-shoot the film again with a better quality camera (canon 600d) to improve the picture quality and control the light exposure and colour correction. We are also going to change the storyboard around to reinforce the chase scene. We are also going to put one more shot into the film at the end and put the "Wayward" title at the beginning of the film with our Tarantino style descriptive quote (like from Kill Bill and Pulp Fiction). This will enforce the idea our character "Richard" is deranged, something we didn't explore enough in the film. We are also going to change the film so it is in Cinemascope (2:35:1).
